Thursday, 12 June 2014

FMP




These are my final four images from my FMP! Some feedback would be much apprecited :) 






1 comment:

  1. You stepped out of your comfort zone to produce a series of portraits that attempted to represent the retired community. This was a huge challenge for a limited time, and this is shown from the final outcome. You struggled with lighting and equipment but with clever cropping and editing the final 4 worked as a stronger set. Personally the shot of Eric is the best with the contrast of colour and the subtle hint of his previous career. What would have worked better is an anecdote about each person this would have added further context to the images. In future remember to ask for guidance and support from peers and tutors this strength your abilities and confidence. Good luck in the future

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